Happy new year. Over the past three years I have trained myself to use simple sentence and phrases. After reviewing some of my blogs of four or five years ago I realize that this move toward simplicity has really affected the way I write and the message I communicate. Happy new year is quite a simple greeting and the assumption is that everyone will know that I am talking personally to them. Actually it can say everything I wanted say or he can do very little to enhance the warm feelings that I wish to convey. After realizing that my writing has slipped radically I gave myself a Happy Season present in the form of a DVD program entitled “How to write great sentences”, from the Great Courses Series. I had gotten to the point of saying what I feel on a subject without considering the best way to assure that, you the reader, will have the best opportunity to understand the message I am trying to convey.
Take for instance the statement, whiskey for breakfast, which seems to be in it’s simplest form as the statements whiskey breakfast and breakfast whiskey seem to convey different meanings and leave the intended meeting up for interpretation. Many times a sentence such as this will evoke a negative response as all but the very serious drinker will make a judgement about the assumed depravity of the consumer of whiskey for breakfast. If you asked me how many times I have consumed whiskey for breakfast I would respond with the number eighty or ninety times as my family always started Christmas and New Years with a shot of the best blended whiskey before opening presents and to steady our nerves after an evening of revelry on January 1st. So if I wanted to use a more accurate form of the sentence whiskey for breakfast, as it applies to me, I would say that the holidays provided a special experience for me as it was a warm and loving time of the gathering of our family to experience joy and tenderness from special family members that we seldom saw in person, and led to the development of a tradition of toast on Christmas and New Years day with a shot of fine whiskey which led to the invitation of please join us for whiskey for breakfast on the 25th of December and the first of January.
I have barely started the program but I am very excited to see if completing the course adds fun and more precise communication in my sentences. AND
to all of my Xanga friends I hope the coming year provides an abundance of joy, love, peace and prosperity,
keep the faith
david
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